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             Naruto came to the bridge with bandages all over his arms possiably legs that day. No one asked. No one ever did, except maybe Iruka, but did he ever really care, Naruto wasnt sure.
Naruto always wore long sleaves and jeans every day. Hot or cold. Nothing more, except maybe his jacket every once in a while.
No one knew about his secrets, or so he thought.

Kakashi watched Naruto that day, he couldn't fight Sasuke like normal.
All he was doing was blocking, and a bad effort at that.
Sasuke flicked him softly on the chest, but even that sent him flying a few feet backwards into a tree.
A gasp of pain echoed for a minute, before Naruto stood back up, slowly and stumbling.
He walked towards Sasuke, but the raven just shook his head.
Even he knew Naruto was in no shape to spar, but he didnt know why.
"What's up Naruto. Why can't you fight today?" Sasuke asked.
"What are you talking about teme? I can!" the blonde lied, obviously in pain, as his voice faltered.
Sasuke sighed and shook his head.
Naruto ran at Sasuke, only to be pushed away, a bit to hard. He fell to the ground, unconicous.
Sakura rushed over.
Taking off his jacket and shirt, she gasped.
Naruto had many deep, and now freshly opened, wounds all over his body. His left arm was obviously broken, and wrapped badly.
"Naruto..." she whispered.



When the blonde awoke, he was in a hospital bed, surrounded by his friends and teachers.
"Naruto!" Tsunade gasped hugging him softly.
The blonde's sad eyes cast downward.
"What's the matter?" Sakura asked.
Naruto muttered something, before looking up with eyes that could break your heart.
"Naruto, how did this happen?" Iruka questioned.
The blonde shook his head.
"Naruto, please. Tell us." Iruka pled.
"I cant." he whispered, as a tear fell down his shirt.


A week later he was released.
The next day, Naruto didnt show up at the bridge.
Team 7 rushed to find him.
But when they did, they wished they hadn't.


Naruto was dead.
Beaten to death.
On his way to the bridge.
By whom?


A few days later, a few people surrounded a polish marble rock. Shadded by a large tree with a swing hanging from it.
Ingraved:

Naruto Uzimaki
Friend and Hero
October 6th, 2007


Tears were shed that day.
Blood was too. Sasuke found out who did that to Naruto.
3 more deaths that day.

A few days later, Sasuke came back to the grave.
It was destroyed.
Broken, Trashed, and brunt in the grass was:
We dont make graves for monsters.

Sasuke fell to his knees crying.
He understood Naruto, he loved him.


Suddenly he heard a soft laugh.
Turning around, he saw Naruto, with his dad, and many of their fallen comrades over the years.
"Naruto.." he whispered.
"I love you Sasuke, Good-bye." was the blonde's words. Before they disapeared in a gust of wind.

Sasuke smiled.
I was emo.
Okay.
I was emo and listing to Martina Mcbrides- Concrete Angels ----> [link]

That's the reason.
Here you go.

SASUNARU if you look carefully

-Seth
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EcoReibun Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
I'm gonna cry *sniff sniff*
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spellxlover Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
So sad... *crys a bit but is trying not to* I know he's in a better place now but that only makes me cry harder! TTATT

ps. grate jobe you did there best story eva, oh and how do you put a pic on the smily face thingy?
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Phoenixtear101 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Why Naruto!?! Why didn't you tell us who is hurting you!?! *Grabs him into a tight hug* Good story by the way.
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Desdemona-Lethe Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2010
Waaaahhhhh, you made me cry! Poor Naruto~~ :iconimverysadplz:
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sasunarulvr4eva Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2009
i luv the song concree angel and this fanfic waz BEAUTIFUL!!
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AnimeFRIZEAK Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2008
y did naruto have to die on my B-day!!! *cries*
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stary202 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2007
Another great fan fic. IFS (InuyashFmaSkoolar) *Gives a thumbs up and winks just like guy-sensie*
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manganimemarija Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2007  Student
I liked it!! Why are you sooo good at this!!
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AnimeFreak-27 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2007
I am to sad for word but it was still really good.
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blackslayer14 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007  Student Writer
this was sad very i almost cried
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:iconhoples:
Hoples Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
Poor Naru-chan... Why have they kill him? Why can they just understand he is not monster.... and why he dont fight back? *run away criing*
Michael: She did it again...
SEth:v*look form his book* yup...
Hoples: *in emo corner* Poor Naru-chan.....

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By the way Great job! :)
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:iconinuyashafmaskoolar:
InuyashaFMASkoolar Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007
Serioslly.
O.o...wowish.
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:iconhoples:
Hoples Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
Serioslly! :)
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:icondraugsereg:
Draugsereg Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2007
Verey interesting. Not seen the likes of it before.
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:iconinuyashafmaskoolar:
InuyashaFMASkoolar Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007
^^
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kitsune2736 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
D: ah~ TT.TT
you kill naru-chan....it's good tho...*cries*
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:iconinuyashafmaskoolar:
InuyashaFMASkoolar Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007
Srrrry.
least he's happier now!!
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:iconyuri-no-hana:
Yuri-no-Hana Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2007
EMO!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That made me cry!!! *whine*
You killed off naru?
hum...
although it was good
chu~
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InuyashaFMASkoolar Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007
IM SOOOOOORRRRRRRRRY!!!!!
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yesh im sorrry.
^^ thank you.
:hug:
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:iconyuri-no-hana:
Yuri-no-Hana Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007
don't be sorry, it was good!!
i love all your work.
chu~ :hug:
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:iconinuyashafmaskoolar:
InuyashaFMASkoolar Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2007
^^ :hug: thank you
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Yuri-no-Hana Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2007
of course :heart:
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EmoHateFreak Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2007   Writer
I should sue you for murdering Naruto my ex-husband (Orochimaru's my husband X3) but he was my bestest friend so see you in court or bring him back to life in a sequel
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InuyashaFMASkoolar Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007
:[ sorries.
lol.
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:iconemohatefreak:
EmoHateFreak Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007   Writer
hurry before i change my mind
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RoelantsKitty Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2007
awww so sadfull xO
but i'm glad naru's int he end with his dad and so ^^
good job on it =]
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InuyashaFMASkoolar Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007
thank you.
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RoelantsKitty Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007
np ^^
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RedRosePetals94 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2007
Sethyyy~beautiful (as always) love the ending!!!

~ur bestest friend on dA (maybe??) Kelly Marie
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InuyashaFMASkoolar Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007
^^ thankzy.
EVERYBODYZ MY BESTYFRIEND ON DA.
[wow that sounds gay. it doesnt look like da it looks like a gansta word. DA BOMB hahahhaha...... no im not hyper.]
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RedRosePetals94 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007
really i kinds seemz it but what do i know i have to go to school wit all girls...EVERYDAY OF MY SCHOOL LIFE.





I really need a new boyfriend
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InuyashaFMASkoolar Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2007
OUCH.
that would get annoying.
Guys are the joy of school.
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RedRosePetals94 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2007
which is why our school has mix dances all weekend!!!!
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:iconinuyashafmaskoolar:
InuyashaFMASkoolar Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2007
THAT'S good.
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EmoNemoDan Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2007
cooool.
naruto's awesome :D.
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:iconinuyashafmaskoolar:
InuyashaFMASkoolar Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007
lol yEs he is.

UR name and UR avatar dont match...
COOOOOOOOLLLLLLL.
i like the :] picture
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rakiya Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2007
Luv emo stories!Hah,nice,nice,i think i may be suddenly emo.:+fav:,cause I like it a lot.But...Naruto Uzimaki....hehehe...nice....
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InuyashaFMASkoolar Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007
^^
aww dont emoish. its baddd.

HAHAHA i like ur signature.
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facemyback Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2007
yay 1st to coment...nice job..like it..i mean love it!!
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:iconinuyashafmaskoolar:
InuyashaFMASkoolar Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007
lol. YAH!
lol thankzy.
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